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Title

Robyn's Nest

Author

Sven the Elder

Story Code(s)

M/F

Length

3,900 words

Rating

Good

Summary

Sven gets left, by his buddy, at a lodge. Robyn keeps him company.

Commentary

I liked the descriptions in this story. The author does not feel the need to attempt to describe everything, just that which he feels it is his job to describe.

It would have been nice if there had been a dilemma in this story. It is a description of a sexual encounter, and not much else. I liked the description, so I liked the story, but it would have been nice if there has been a little more to it.

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Robyn's Nest