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Title |
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Author |
Munawaruddin Ali |
Story Code(s) |
M/F/F |
Length |
5,000 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Mohammad's car breaks down, but two beautiful, eighteen-year-olds give him a lift. |
Commentary |
This was a very well paced stroke story. Boy meets girls.
Boy fucks girls. What makes it work is that the author does
not rush the plot. The sex is left for the end. The author fills
the intervening time with diversions that seems
appropriate for this sort of story. The plot is pretty simple and the characters are not too complex, but this story works because the author leads the reader on a little chase before getting to the one part that we all know will be there. |
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