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Title |
Janey's May |
Author |
Janey |
Story Code(s) |
F/M |
Length |
6,900 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
Sergeant Jane MacDonald is in the hospital after being wounded in action. She meets an intern named Taria, a doctor named BillyG, and thinks about her old unit. |
Commentary |
The author tried to do too much in this story. There are
parts that work, but over all it seems too crowded. The flashback part of the story is littered with references to many ASSM authors. I found many of the references amusing. The most touching scene was the one with BillyG pleasuring Sgt. MacDonald. At the beginning of the story Janey says that this story came to her in a dream. I believe her. |
ASSM |
Janey's May |