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Title |
Roommates |
Author |
Munawaruddin Ali |
Story Code(s) |
M/F/F |
Length |
3,200 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
Anthony loses his virginity to his two beautiful roommates after a few hands of poker. |
Commentary |
I have seen this plot before. The characters are
transparent. This is a shell of a story. It needs to be edited
and rewritten. Occasionally this story got so pathetic it was funny. Plots come and go. An author should try to inject some of herself into what she is writing. With the exception of the pathetic parts, this story felt unoriginal. |
ASSM |
Roommates |
| Roommates |