SUMMARY: Gail is nervous about getting married to Brian. Unlike her husband-to-be, she has never sown any wild oats, so to speak. In other words, the only man she has ever slept with is Brian, and if she remains faithful and married then he will be the only man she ever sleeps with. So, she calls up Mike, one of Brian's friends, and invites him over for a little tête-à-tête, so to speak.

COMMENTARY: This is a very well written story. It happens to be both arousing and amusing. On the whole I would say that it is more arousing than amusing, but the humor is definitely there. The author does a very nice job setting the scene and then carrying through with the plot. The narrator's sarcastic asides brought a smile to my face on more than one occasion. The sex had a slightly different effect on me.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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• ASSM Archive
• Part 1 of 1