SUMMARY: Ken catches his sister on videotape, screwing one of her professors. He decides to blackmail her, but things don't work out quite as he had planned.

COMMENTARY: There some things about this story that I do like. The author does a credible job setting it up. The sex is arousing. It is a brother-sister incest story, which I often enjoy, even though I don't have any sisters.

There are three things, in particular, that I do not like about this story. One, the pacing of the plot is disappointing. The story just keeps going and going, straight ahead, without any breaks. Two, I am unsatisfied with the way everything works out neatly in the end. The premise of the story is unrealistic enough, but I have read and enjoyed other stories that were built upon similarly unrealistic foundations. Yet, in this case, I have a hard time believing that the world this one takes place in bears anything other than a passing resemblance to our own. Three, I had a hard time sympathizing with Ken. Everything went his way, so why should I care whether he gets to score with his sister or not? He says that his sister has the upper hand when it comes to dealing with their parents, but he never really shows it; he only says so.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 6.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 3/5
• Editing: 4/5
• Plot and Characters: 2/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

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