SUMMARY: Greg is mowing his lawn one day when a beautiful woman shows up and asks if she can spend the night. She seems to know quite a bit about him and he is suspicious.

COMMENTARY: This is an intriguing story. It isn't completely straight forward. Trying to figure out what it was all about gave me an additional reason for not wanting to put it down. In fact I would go so far as to say that this story was a little more interesting than it was arousing. It was arousing, just not as arousing it was interesting. Now that I am done chasing my tail, why don't I get back to the review.

The author is British and uses a few expressions which baffled me, at first. I do not perceive this as a flaw, but something that other non-British readers might want to keep mind.

If you are looking for stroke material, then I would recommend looking elsewhere, which is not to that this story isn't arousing; it is. I do recommend it if you are looking for something that might actually make you stop and reflect on what you just read. Of course, I suppose, some of you may enjoy reflecting on stroke material as well. Either way, I recommend this story, which in my opinion is much more than just stroke material.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

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