SUMMARY: Jen has an internet chat buddy, Laura, whom she has never met in person. Laura isn't completely satisfied in her marriage. She wants to experiment. Jen is more than willing to be of assistance.

COMMENTARY: There isn't any one thing about this story that sticks out in my mind. It is just very well written and extremely arousing. It is well executed, not too predictable, and does not cut to the chase too quickly. At the same time the author does a nice job of hinting at what is to come without being too explicit.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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