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Title |
The Blood Pressure Check |
Author |
Al Steiner |
Length |
4,300 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (Female, Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Doctor-Patient |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Hospital |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Bob goes for a physical. He doesn't pass the blood pressure test. The doctor tries a rather unorthodox method to lower his blood pressure. In the end, she isn't successful, in lowering his blood pressure, but is satisfied enough to fudge the numbers on his forms. |
Commentary |
This is a fun story. Nothing in particular about it sticks out, other than the fact that it is very arousing and very well written. I think this is because the author does a nice job of setting the story up before even hinting at anything sexual. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |
Other Link(s) |
Stories Online |