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Title |
Exposed |
Author |
Vickie Morgan |
Length |
6,300 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
-- |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
-- |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Strip Club Talk Show |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Kate is invited on a daytime talk show under the pretense that she will be discussing her friendship with her best friend Debbie. During the course of the show Debbie admits to having an affair with Harry, Kate's husband. Harry confirms Debbie's boast and suggests that Debbie move in with them. Kate doesn't take to Harry's idea, but does accept an invitation from the owner of a strip club, who also appeared on the show. |
Commentary |
I have a feeling that this story may appeal to women
more than it does to men. There isn't any sex in it. It is a
nice story, but I wasn't drawn in by Kate's dilemma. I was not
able to feel Kate's pain, and thus it was hard for me to
appreciate her triumph (of sorts) at the end of the story. On the whole I would say that Kate's character seemed a bit too restrained. I am not suggesting that she should have been telling the world how she feels. I am suggesting that the author should have given more details that would show, rather than tell the reader, what Kate was experiencing. |
Arousal |
2 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
6.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Good |
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