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Title |
Tiffany's Lesson |
Author |
a.k.a. nolan |
Length |
9,300 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) Homosexual (Female) |
Relationship(s) |
Married Couple Fellow Hotel Guests |
Kink(s) |
Exhibitionism |
Setting(s) |
Hotel |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Andrew and Gwen are on vacation in San Diego when they meet Tiffany, who has just finished her junior year of high school. They wouldn't have met her if it weren't for the fact that they left their curtains partly open while they were screwing. Tiffany wouldn't have met them if it weren't for her curiosity getting the better of her. Gwen and Andrew arrange to spend some time with her before she heads home the next day. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. While it does begin
and end with sex, there is enough plot and characterization
thrown in between to make this story rather arousing. The
uncertainty that Andrew, who narrates the story, displays as the
story unfolds certainly makes this story more enjoyable. This is a well written story. If flows nicely. As I mentioned before there is a plot, although it does revolve around sex. The flow seems logical enough. The characters are nicely handled. Most of the dialogue is between Andrew and Gwen. Because Tiffany was not as vocal as the other two she did not seem quite as real as them. I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It is well written and very arousing. I think it will appeal more to male readers than to female readers. I say this because what it describes seems more of a male fantasy than a female fantasy. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
8.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
Author's |
a.k.a. nolan's stories |