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Title |
Learning to Love Again |
Author |
Lambchop |
Length |
4,000 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Married Couple Parent-Teacher |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
With some help from his daughter's teacher, Harry gets over losing Susan, his wife. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The author does a
nice job of showing rather than telling the reader what each of
the characters are experiencing. I actually found the opening
scene so arousing that when the scene comes to a sudden stop I
had a hard time focusing on the seriousness of the next scene. This is a well written story. The author does a nice job of tossing the point of view back and forth between Harry and Susan and then later between Harry and Colleen, his daughter's teacher. One problem that I did have with this story was the shift in mood from the first scene to the second one. It happens rather abruptly. The second scene also felt wedged in between the first and third scenes, as if the author included it only because he had to. On the whole I like this story. It is well written and very arousing. I think it should appeal to those who like stories that are of a romantic flavor. I have given it a Very Good. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
8.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Very Good |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |
Author's |
Lambchop's Erotic Stories |