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Title |
My Mother, Susan |
Author |
Billy G |
Length |
12,400 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Incest (Mother-Son) |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
College Home |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
What starts off as a crush, leads to much more between Susan and her college-age son, Billy. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The author does not
take things too fast. By the time Billy and Susan get hot and
heavy it seems appropriate and is arousing, which is not to say
that the story is not arousing before that point. The little
games that mother and son play before they decide to get
horizontal together are also rather arousing. This is a very well written story. It flows very nicely. It is well paced. Both characters seemed realistic. The author does a nice job describing the relationship that mother and son share through narration and dialogue. One of the outstanding qualities of this story is that it does not feel forced; it just seems to follow a natural course. I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It is both very arousing and very well written. If you want something that has sex in it from the first paragraph you may be a bit disappointed. On the other hand if you appreciate good writing I think you should enjoy this one. Of course, if you cannot enjoy an incest story under any circumstances then you may want to skip this one. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
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