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Title

 San Gimignano

Author

 Gordie

Story Code(s)

 M/F

Story Theme(s)

 Older Woman/Younger Man

Length

 6,400 words

Arousal

 4 out of 5

Plot and Characters

 3 out of 5

Editing

 5 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 8.0 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Very Good

Summary

 Tim, a college student, lusts for Mrs. Antonelli, the fifty-something widow that owns the restaurant where he waits on tables. One night she asks him to stay late and...

Commentary

 The author makes it clear that there is a sexual attraction between Tim and Mrs. Antonelli from early on, but does not have them come close to playing hide the salami, until much later. This helps make the story more arousing. The authors descriptions of sex also do not focus too much on the physical elements. This is a very arousing story.

The story is very well edited for grammar and spelling, but the story does feel a bit forced. I think this is due to the fact that the characters are more types than they are flesh and blood. It's not that they seemed unfeeling, but rather that they did not have any quirks. You know, those things that make each one of us unique. I didn't see them. The plot does flow nicely.

I liked this story. Why? Number one, because the author did a good job plotting the story, and number two, because I like the older woman/younger man theme. It isn't as taboo a theme as say incest, but it is one that society still is not completely accepting of. If you like this sort of theme or like a little plot with your sex story then I think you may enjoy this one. I have given it a Very Good.

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