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Title

 Eager Beaver

Author

 Jenny Wanshel

Story Code(s)

 F/F/M, Teen

Story Theme(s)

 Size Matters

Length

 10,000 words

Arousal

 4 out of 5

Plot and Characters

 5 out of 5

Editing

 5 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 9.0 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Very Good

Summary

 Jenny and Cindy, two cock-hungry sophomores in high school, convince Brad, a senior with a reputed monster-cock, to go out with them.

Commentary

 I am usually rather repelled by stories in which the main characters seem to be fixated on size, and while that is definitely the case here, the narration itself does not focus too much on size. The result is that I was able to enjoy the story without being bombarded with comments about how big Brad's cock is. It also helped that the author builds up to the sex and does not begin the story with it. This is a very arousing story.

One thing that I really like about this story is Jenny's runing commentary on her own life. It adds both humor and realism. Brad and Cindy are not quite as vividly painted as Jenny is. The plot runs smoothly. What makes the story stand out is the main character. This is a very well written story.

Well, I definitely enjoyed this story. The story is very well written, very arousing and very well edited. As I said before if there is one thing about this story that stands out, in my mind, it is not the size of Brad's cock (or is that cuck?) but rather Jenny's running commentary on her own life. This is a Very Good story.

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