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Title |
Five Hours |
Author |
John A |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Story Theme(s) |
Infidelity |
Length |
5,500 words |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and Characters |
5 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
10.0 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Outstanding |
Summary |
John gets paired with Sarah when he goes golfing, while his wife and children are at a nearby beach park. He enjoys Sarah's company so much, through 18 holes and lunch afterwards, that he finds it hard to resist when she makes him an indecent proposal. |
Commentary |
No bones about it, this story is extremely arousing. It isn't so
much that the story is filled with graphic sex, which it isn't, as
much as it is the attraction that John feels for Sarah, which, by the
way, she reciprocates. The chemistry between the two of them, which
the author does a beautiful job describing, makes this story really
special. I think it also helps that the story is about a
relationship more than it is about sex. Well, other than having a beautifully depicted relationship between two characters that are both attractive and realistic, this story is also very nicely plotted. It flows smoothly. There is a nice balance struck between dialogue and narration. Even though John tells the story, it seems to be about Sarah almost as much as it is about him. If you didn't read the last two paragraphs then maybe you haven't figured it out yet, so let me spell it out for you: I really enjoyed this story quite a bit. It is extremely arousing, very well written and very well edited. One thing that makes this story worth reading is that it is both entertaining and touching at the same time. I have given it an Excellent. |
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