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Title |
Practice Makes Perfect |
Author |
Poison Ivan |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Story Theme(s) |
-- |
Length |
7,600 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Plot and Characters |
5 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Very Good |
Summary |
On New Year's Eve Jon reflects on past relationships at the same time that he begins a new one. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. It is not overflowing with sexual
situations, but there are more than a few of them. The range of
experiences that Jon has, helps to keep the story and the sex fresh
and arousing. The story itself is wonderful. The plot flows very nicely. As in some of his other stories, Ivan has chosen to use flashbacks. He does so quite effectively. He jumps back and forth between past and present more than once, with impecable timing. I enjoyed all of the characters. They all seemed real. It is worth noting that the women are not as clearly defined as Jon is. This is probably because the story is told from Jon's point of view, and because he seems to be very introspective. This is a very well written story. It also very arousing, but I appreciated it more from an objective point of view than I did enjoy it from a subjective point of view. That's why I have given it a Very Good, under Subjective Analysis, rather than an Excellent. |
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