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Title

 Expert Tease

Author

 Philippe Richard

Story Code(s)

 M/F/F

Length

 5,700 words

Arousal

 5 out of 5

Story

 3 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 8 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Excellent

Summary

 Philip runs into Jessica in the same Paris nightclub where he met her before. This time she does more than just tease him. She tells him how she got to be an expert tease.

Commentary

 This story is extremely arousing. It is worth noting that there is no actual sexual intercourse. I'm not too sure how realistic some of the action is in this story. Maybe it is physically possible and maybe it isn't. I'm just not sure. I do know one thing, I found it arousing, extremely arousing.

This story has plot and characters. The characters are there to forward the plot, and not the other way around. In other words there is nothing extremely special about any of the characters. On the other hand this is a tale of sexual fantasy. It is designed to entertain, not enlighten. I did like the format of the story. The author employs flashbacks quite usefully to allow Jessica to reveal her past. I wish the author would write shorter paragraphs. There is nothing wrong with breaking up a paragraph that consists of 22 sentences and over 500 words down into a few shorter paragraphs. The information conveyed did not seem to be superfluous, but the manner in which it was conveyed was not entirely pleasing to the eye.

I enjoyed this story a lot. In particular I liked the author's use of flashbacks. As I mentioned before I found the story extremely arousing. I have placed it on my A-list.

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