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Title

 Mousehunt/Dragonslayer

Author

 Beltorion

Story Code(s)

 M/F

Length

 5,200 words

Arousal

 4 out of 5

Story

 5 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 9 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Excellent

Summary

 Late one night a young man, presumably in his twenties, comes to the rescue of his neighbor, Julie. She has a mouse scurrying around her apartment. The narrator takes care of the mouse and then, with Julie's approval, claims his reward.

Commentary

 This is a very arousing story. I liked the soft touches that author includes. They make the story more realistic. The characters seem to have more on the brain than just rutting. I think this makes the story more arousing.

This is a very well written story. I like both the characters. They seem real and not too far fetched. The plot is a simple one, but I liked it. It flows nicely and has enough twists and turns to make it an enjoyable read.

This is a fun read. If you like romantic sex stories, then you'll probably like this one. I was impressed by both the quality of the writing and the nature of the story. It belongs on my A-list.

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