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Title

Mom's New Love

Author

Roderigo

Story Code(s)

m/F, Teen, Inc

Length

9,000 words

Arousal

3 out of 5

Story

3 out of 5

Objective Analysis

6 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

Good

Summary

Mom is horny. Dad hasn't been too interested in sex lately. Enter teenage son.

Commentary

I found this story to be somewhat arousing. In this case that means that I found the story arousing at first, but as the story progressed I found myself wilting away. The reason for this is probably the abundance of sex to the exclusion of plot.

This is a stroke story; no doubt about it. I had no problems with the plot until the author decided that graphic descriptions of sex can stand on their own. In other words once the sex begins it doesn't stop for anything, more or less. The characters were pretty standard for a stroke story. They did not have much on their minds other than sex.

If there had been less sex and more plot in this story then I might have liked it more. If the subject matter is something that pricks your interest, or you think plot is overrated, then you might enjoy this story. As for me, I have given it a Good, under Subjective Analysis.

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