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Title |
The Shaver II |
Author |
Al Steiner |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
5,400 words |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Story |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
10 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Outstanding |
Summary |
Three weeks have passed since Jen got her pussy shaved by Charlie, her sister-in-law. David, Jen's husband and Charlie's brother, was excited about his wife's new look, at first, but his interest has faded. Jen starts to think about how much she enjoyed what Charlie did to her and decides that she wants more of the same. |
Commentary |
This is an extremely arousing story. Having
read the first story in the series probably
helped. I had an idea of what was to come.
I think it also helped that Charlie does not
just jump back into bed with Jen. She has
needs too. This is a very well written story. I enjoyed reading the verbal back and forth between Jen and Charlie, as well as Jen's narration. There are both internal and external and external conflicts, unlike the first story where there just seemed to be an internal one. In the process, Charlie becomes a more interesting character. The first story seemed to revolve, to a large degree, around how Charlie came to shave Jen, in other words it was more plot oriented. This story seems to revolve around the characters, Jen and Charlie, what makes them who they are and how they see their relationship changing. Both stories have plot and both have character development, but that is the way I see them when I compare them. I really enjoyed this story. It is extremely arousing and well written. Some readers may disagree with me, but it reminds me of some of Ann Douglas' better lesbian stories. It definitely makes my A-list. While it is not essential, I recommend that you read the prior story in this series, "The Shaver". It is also worth noting that the author has left the ending open, in other words he might write another story about Jen and Charlie. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |