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Title |
A New Outlook on Life |
Author |
Rosa |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Exhib |
Length |
2,400 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Story |
4 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
8 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Very Good |
Summary |
Rosa gets a late customer as she is preparing about to close the hair salon. He is older, looks richer, and wants a little more than just a haircut. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. I enjoyed
seeing Rosa experience conflicting
emotions. It made her seem more realistic
and the story more arousing. This is a well written stroke story. Rosa wants to close the shop, but fate and her customer have other ideas about what she should be doing. The author does take the time to set the mood. Rosa has worries that don't involve her sex life. These are the sorts of things that make her seem realistic, but they are not dominant enough in the story for me to consider it not to be a stroke story. The plot is well paced. I liked this story, it is well written and very arousing, but I'm not wild about it. I like it, but it belongs on my B-list not my A-list. So, if this sounds like something that interests you or you have the time I advise you read this. It is a fun read. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |