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Title |
Miss Rene and Tommy |
Author |
Schulzie |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, M-solo, F-solo, Teen, Pedo |
Length |
25,200 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Arousal Factor |
Ultra |
Story Factor |
High |
Summary |
Rene (29, mother of two, recently divorced) seduces Tommy her 13-year-old next door neighbor. |
Commentary |
This story kept my attention, to say the least.
There is not much sex in it, but there is plenty
of build up. The whole story basically
consists of Rene teasing Tommy until she
finally jumps in bed with him. Tommy
happens to be extremely well endowed for a
boy his age. Rene feels that she needs to
introduce him to sex, because the size of
him cock will only scare younger women off. Rene is more than just a woman who wants to have sex with her next- door-neighbor. She has some doubts and fears about what she is doing. Tommy is not extremely deep, but this is not his story as much as it is Rene's. This story does contain pedofilia, which I normally do not care for. The fact that it was an older woman taking advantage of a boy in his early teens helped. I cannot see enjoying a similar story in which an older man seduces a 13-year-old girl. This is a sexism, on my part. There is one scene that made me cringe, while I was reading it. In this scene, Tommy is baby-sitting for Rene and is helping her two daughters, ages 4 and 6, to bathe themselves. In retrospect I do not think there is anything morally wrong with that scene. Simply put, I cringed because I was not sure what the author was doing with the scene. I feared, because I saw potential for the story to go in a direction that might make me violently ill. The story did not, but I felt obliged to mention it in my review. |
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