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Title

 Batteries Included

Author

 Miss Behavin'

Story Code(s)

 F/M, F-solo

Length

 14,900 words

Rating

 Outstanding

Arousal Factor

 Ultra

Story Factor

 Ultra

Summary

 Thanks to a tension reducing device, Miranda and Robert experience a new level of intimacy in their relationship.

Commentary

 I searched high and low, but could not find any short comings in this story. Both of the main characters seem real to me. For that matter, so does the majority of the supporting cast. The plot is very nicely paced. The story develops as it proceeds. Its appeal is not based solely in how the author sets it up, but all so in how the author executes it.

What I really liked was the interaction between Miranda and Rob, both verbal and nonverbal. I think the author does a wonderful job of clueing in the reader as to how both of them are feeling and thinking.

This is not a science-fiction story. If you want to know what the device is, then read the story. You will not be disappointed.

ASSM Link(s)

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