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Title |
Tales of the East Indies |
Author |
Sven the Elder |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
4,000 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Arousal Factor |
Low |
Story Factor |
Low |
Summary |
Sven tells us about his infidelities in the East Indies. |
Commentary |
I can appreciate what the author was trying
to do with this story, but it did not work for
me. I look for stories that inspire my
imagination and/or libido. This one
succeeded in part on the second count, but
fell short on the first. The author begins with an introduction, tells two tales, and ends with some concluding remarks. The first tale I liked. It reminded me of one of his more recent stories, "Therapy". The second story I was not so crazy about. While the first tale lacked plot or character development, it did have details that I found arousing. The second tale lacked plot, character development, and arousing details. What it did have was a description of a sexual encounter with a strange woman. I suppose that I am not being fair to the author. The thrust of the story is not sex, but rather an attempt to reveal a side of his character. He intends to do this by relating a couple tales. Unfortunately, it did not work for me. Possibly this has to do with cultural differences, or the fact that he is a couple decades older than me, or the fact that he is married and I am not. Either way, this story did not do it for me. |
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