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Title

Shower Buddies (Chapters 1 & 2)

Author

Stone Wolf

Story Code(s)

No Sex

Length

4,700 words

Rating

Very Good

Summary

Julie and Harold meet in the shower. They have budget cuts and a fire to thank for their little encounters.

Commentary

This is a good beginning. There is both plot and character development. The author shows us how attraction develops between the two and how both are somewhat apprehensive. He also introduces a villain. This story shows definite potential. It is a shame it was never finished.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 2)
Part 2 (of 2)