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Title |
Whore! |
Author |
Nick |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
1,100 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
She pretends to be a prostitute. He loves it, and so does she. |
Commentary |
I liked this story. I like the way the author builds up the moment, and then cuts away. He gives you just enough details so that you know what is going to happen, but then does not describe it. The details he omits are as important as the ones he includes. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |