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Title |
Pump Song |
Author |
Mat Twassel |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
3,600 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Mat tells Laura a story. Laura sucks Mat's cock. They both listen to the bed springs squeaking, on the floor above them, as Annie, their daughter, make love to Tom, her husband. |
Commentary |
I like the characters in this story. I like the setting. It is nice and calm, peaceful. I like the pace. It is nice and leisurely, not rushed. I like both stories, the one Mat tells Laura and the one in which Mat tells Laura a story. If only most summer nights could be like this one. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |