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Title

Pump Song

Author

Mat Twassel

Story Code(s)

M/F

Length

3,600 words

Rating

Very Good

Summary

Mat tells Laura a story. Laura sucks Mat's cock. They both listen to the bed springs squeaking, on the floor above them, as Annie, their daughter, make love to Tom, her husband.

Commentary

I like the characters in this story. I like the setting. It is nice and calm, peaceful. I like the pace. It is nice and leisurely, not rushed. I like both stories, the one Mat tells Laura and the one in which Mat tells Laura a story.

If only most summer nights could be like this one.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 1)