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The Tease (Chapters 1 - 5)

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Summary

Steve meets Mary on the North Shore of Oahu. She teases him mercilessly.

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The first five chapters of this incomplete story read like the title. Poor Steve never gets to dip his wick or cum, except for the one time when he jerks himself off. Mary, on the other hand, comes at least three times; with Steve's assistance, of course. I felt teased right along with Steve. I kept on waiting for the moment when Mary would give Steve what she literally has him begging for, but it never comes (and neither does he).

This story is very arousing and very well written. Steve is a putz, who lets his cock do all the thinking, and Mary is a tease, who manipulates Steve masterfully (or would that be mistress-fully). They are not deep characters, but I like the way the author uses them.

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