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Janey's June

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Summary

Janey visits Abe's bookstore on what otherwise would have been a quiet, uneventful morning.

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I like this story. Despite the fact that I like it, I am not completely satisfied with it. It feels a bit distant and cold at times, especially in the beginning.

I like Abe's reactions to Janey. I think the author does a good job showing how the characters feel, when they are having sex, without explicitly saying how they feel.

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