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Title |
Crazy Tomas |
Author |
Hawk Richards |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
1,000 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Tomas picks a flower and gets laid. |
Commentary |
After reading this story I feel like I missed something. It is well written, but it seems as though the author left something out. I had trouble making the transition from the first part of the story to the second part. The connection between the beginning and ending was a bit tenuous. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |