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Title |
True Love |
Author |
Greatness |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, NC, F/F, Cons |
Length |
4,700 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Mary Lou has not had much luck with boys, but then she meets Alecia. |
Commentary |
This is different. The first part consists of the narrator
describing a typical date. It made my skin crawl. I think
that was the desired effect. The rest of the story does not
involve nonconsensual sex. This was a well written story, but it is also a stroke story. I found it enjoyable and arousing after I got through the first part. There is tension in this story. The narrator is a very sensitive character and the author does a good job of depicting that. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |