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Title |
The Quickie |
Author |
Sue D. Nyym |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
2,500 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
Sex in the bathroom of the local supermarket. |
Commentary |
This story started off good. I liked the build up. I found the
sex to be a little too detailed. The author should either have shortened the description of the sex, or thrown something else in the story to liven it up. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |