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Title

 Hooked on a Feeling

Author

 Terry Jones

Story Code(s)

 F/M

Length

 4,200 words

Rating

 Good

Summary

 Kate, a young woman from west Texas, runs into her old flame.

Commentary

 This story is well put together. It is well paced. There is more to the plot than just sex.

I liked Kate, her willfulness was very becoming. The other characters were much less complex.

The editing leaves something to be desired. There was a number of sentences that could have been chopped up into smaller ones.

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