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Title |
The Inn |
Author |
Uther Pendragon |
Story Code(s) |
F/M |
Length |
2,000 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
A woman gets very familiar with a stranger she meets at dinner. |
Commentary |
This story lacked a dilemma. I figured out the ending
(which I have not given away in this review) before I
finished reading the story. There was not enough build up to the sex. The sex was just two bodies going at it. I got no feel for the individuals involved. Simple stories can work, but there has to be a little something to them. This one lacked both characterization and plot. |
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