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Title |
No Tomorrow |
Author |
Crimson Dragon |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
4,700 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Rachel is at the beach, trying to get over breaking up with Mark, when she meets Sara. |
Commentary |
I really liked the descriptions in this story. I could feel the
water and the sand as they caressed Rachel's body. I could
feel Rachel's hesitation as she tried something different. Both Rachel and Sara felt real. They both had emotions and showed some trepidation. There was not much dialogue, but the text more than adequately conveyed how the two women felt. This story was both arousing and somewhat touching. |
ASSM |
No Tomorrow |