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Title |
Last Night Together |
Author |
Inkubus |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
3,500 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
Dominic has one last night with Byronee, his demonic lover. |
Commentary |
I liked the idea behind this story. I really think it could have been done better. There was a plot, but the sex took center stage. The characters were adequate, but nothing impressive. If the sex had not played such a prominent role, in the text of the story, then I might have liked this story. |
ASSM |
Last Night Together |