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Title |
A City Situation |
Author |
Watcher |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, No Sex |
Length |
2,700 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
On an August afternoon Peter braves the heat and humidity of the city to return Kelly's dress and shoes. |
Commentary |
This is the sort of story that leaves a lot to the reader's
imagination. Peter's inner dialogue was very well done.
The images of buildings and carriage rides were also well
crafted. Peter, as a character, was much more fleshed out than Kelly. The author told the story from Peter's perspective, so that is not surprising. It would have been nice if this story had been a little more explicit. |
ASSM |
A City Situation |