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Title |
A Yank in the Outhouse |
Author |
David Shaw |
Story Code(s) |
F/F/M, Voy |
Length |
8,500 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
This story takes place in England during World War II. Sarah is delivering a bottle of wine for the vicar. She gets sidetracked by two English ladies and an American gentleman in a wash house. |
Commentary |
This story had a good premise, but I did not care for the
execution. The greatest strength of this story was its
descriptions of rural England during World War II. There was not much in the way of character development. The characters seemed to be more types then actual people, the narrator included. Possibly if this story had been better edited I would have enjoyed it more. Quite a few of the sentences in this story seemed much too long. It made the story seem rushed. |
ASSM |
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