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Title |
The Hot Tub |
Author |
Fin Haddie |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
2,200 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
David is on vacation in Florida. He is worried that he will not get laid. He does get laid, and in a hot tub. |
Commentary |
The best things I can say about this story is that is does
not do some of the things that make for a bad story. The
sex is not encyclopedic. There is a plot, i.e. the sex does
not begin with the second sentence. The characters in this
story have some standards. Other then that it is just an
average story. The plot was simple. The characters were not all that exciting. There was a dilemma, but it did not take any soul searching on David's part for it to be resolved. The setting seemed generic, and did not have a life of its own. Actually it reminded me more of a wasteland, because the characters in this story could have been in an oasis in the middle of nowhere for all I could tell. This was not a bad story but it was not a great story. |
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The Hot Tub |