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Title |
The Dare |
Author |
Michael K. Smith |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Teen, Exhib |
Length |
8,500 words |
Rating |
Great |
Summary |
Katie issues an Official No-Underwear Dare. Rebecca and her friends agree to the dare. After giving Charlie Harker an eyeful, Rebecca briefly liberates his cock before enveloping it with her mouth. |
Commentary |
I liked the tension in this story. I could feel the narrator's
thrill of doing something verboten for the first time. Most of
the story is given away early on, and yet it is still very
enjoyable. The characters were honest and realistic. The author did an excellent job. He reveals them to the reader rather then tells the reader about them. I think this method is almost always preferable. It also fits in nicely with the exhibitionist activities in this story. |
ASSM |
The Dare |