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Title

Wanting

Author

Lord Malinov

Story Code(s)

M/F

Length

1,500 words

Rating

Great

Summary

Joe returns to his office in a daze. Someone has left a rose on a his desk. There is a card that accompanies the rose. Written on the card are three words. I want you. Joe spends the rest of the day trying to figure out who sent him the rose.

Commentary

This was an outstanding story. There are a few things that I really liked about it. The way Joe wakes up as the story progresses. His little fantasies about each of his female coworkers. His cautious optimism that he can actually figure out who sent him the rose.

The ending was great. I understood it one way the first time I read it and another way the second time I read it. I am still not sure if I was right either time.

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Wanting