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Title

Glenda

Author

The Bear

Story Code(s)

M/F

Length

6,500 words

Rating

5.0

Summary

John sees Glenda, the twenty-something daughter of a friend of his, when he is driving home from work one evening. He offers her a ride. She needs a place to stay, so he offers to put her up for a few days.

Commentary

This story was a bit forced. The plot was simple enough. The characters were not very complex. The dilemma, whether John should allow a relationship to develop between himself and Glenda, seemed a bit artificial.

The story did seem to get a bit icky sweet towards the end. It was an okay story, but nothing great.

ASSM

Glenda