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Title

Behind the Scenes

Author

Ann Douglas

Story Code(s)

F/F

Length

16,000 words

Rating

7.0

Summary

Annette gets a promotion and some time off. The only thing she can think about is hot, lesbian sex. She gets it, but from a woman she never thought about getting it from.

Commentary

This was a good story. Most of the sex scenes were well placed with appropriate lengths, but there was one that seemed a little too long. It really could have been a story unto itself, but maybe I am missing the point, because it did reveal certain facts about Annette's past.

The descriptions, narration, characters, etc. were all well done. The dilemma did not really enter the story until towards the end. I prefer it to be introduced a little earlier, but it was well handled.

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