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Title |
Letters |
Author |
Darkside |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, TG, Transform |
Length |
7,900 words |
Rating |
7.0 |
Summary |
Jennifer and John's mother passes away. She leaves some letters for them to read. They discover some startling facts about their parents. |
Commentary |
I enjoyed this story. It was melodramatic to the point of
being whole wheat. The melodrama added humor. The
plot was good, simple but entertaining. The characters
were a bit wooden, but then I consider that normal seeing
as it was a melodramatic story. There was an occasional sentence with a word out of place. The sex was a bit forced, although the way it was introduced did make me laugh. With a more work I think this could have been an excellent story. |
ASSM |
Part 1 ~ Part 2 |