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Title

Cannon Song

Author

Miles Naismith

Story Code(s)

M/F

Length

5,000 words

Rating

10.0

Summary

In the Spring of 1969 three couples decide to blindly swap partners and see what happens.

Commentary

Wow. That was good, damn good. There was definitely tension in this story. There are six characters in the story, but I only felt like I knew three of them when I was done reading it. (That is just an observation not a criticism.)

The story seemed real enough. Nothing in it felt forced. It was both arousing and touching.

ASSM

Cannon Song