[Some of my responses have been slightly edited or revised. Names redacted for privacy.]
name: depravedanonymousasshole
storyname: Grandpa Dick's and more
email-subject: Feedback
comments: I just binged this series today and I wanted to thank you for writing such an amazing series! I am definitely looking forward to more chapters. Can't wait to see what kind of shenanigans Claire and her family get into. Maybe we could even get a gangbang now that there are 3 guys involved.
I really liked the recent Zoo Mom chapters too, though I hope there is an emphasis on the "Zoo" part of the name in the near future. I haven't read much of it in your works, but I'd love to see Karen or Sissy involved with some choking or breath play too.
I appreciate your dedication to these series. Can't wait to read what comes next!
Hi Mr Asshole,
I really appreciate that you like my stories. As I've posted here before, I had written only a few chapters of Summertime when the writers block set in. Recently, one of our members helped me finish chapter 9 of the series. Unless I get some more inspiration on this story, I don't know if there will be any more added to it. Never can tell tho'.
There are actually quite a few new Zoo Mom chapters written and I'll continue posting them first on our member site and then here. Not sure if Karen or Sissy would like breath play as I really haven't got into that, but ya never can tell what will spew out of my cesspool mind, especially now that you've planted the idea.
I really appreciate hearing from readers. Thank you for taking the time to let me know your thoughts and that you like my stories.
name: Kinco[redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject:
comments: Hope you post some more chapter's soon.
Hey Kinky,
I have. And I will.
name: Rick B
storyname: Gang
email-subject: slow
comments: I feel like I'm getting the stories at a trickle, and would really like to just sit down and keep on reading.
Hey Dick,
First, thank you for your interest and enjoyment of Paul's The Gang series. I will let him know that you like it.
I understand your complaint. However, when I first started posting my stories on my asstr.org site, I started with Summertime at Grandpa Dicks and posted them one right after the other with little time in between. It didn't take long before I had run out of what I had written and writers block had set in. A lot of people let me know they liked the storyline and wanted more, I just had no more to post and had to frantically write what I could. And I have no conscious control over what flows out of my subconscious cesspool at any time. So I had Zoo Mom spewing out and had a few chapters written, and I started posting that. I've never written past ch 9 of Summertime. I wish I could. I like it and I like writing it.
I'm not sure you're aware of what it takes to get a story prepared and formatted in HTML for posting. It does take time, both for the converting process, and then going over it and proofing for any problems that might have been created or missed. It doesn't really take as much effort, time and work as actually creating and writing the stories, but it still does take some time.
Plus the fact that everything published on asstr.org is done for FREE! That means, you pay NOTHING for all of the good writing, the effort that goes into that and the readying it for publication. Do you have a link to the copious stories or websites that you've published all of your material on? I'd be more than happy to provide the link to it if you have one.
Yeah, it IS a trickle because of the work that it takes to do everything that is required to get it in a form that you can then read. And that is the problem with writing a series that continues. A reader will read what's been written or published and want to read the next part. Stand alone stories don't have that problem, but I like to write a continuing series for several reasons. Paul does also. If we published absolutely EVERYTHING that we had written, then there would be a time while we had to write some more... and get complaints about not having more to read. Again, for FREE.
So even if Paul has hundreds of chapters of The Gang written, he has only provided a few hundred (!!) to me and allowed me to post them on our member site. He graciously allows me to post them here on this asstr.org site also, and I'm working to get them in publishing format. I'll just never catch up to him. And again, all of his stuff and mine is posted here for FREE! We're not being paid by anyone to publish it here. We're both doing it out of the desire just to share with others. And again, doing it for FREE!
If you want to read the first 220 chapters of The Gang all in one sitting, you can join our member site and get two chapters a week of The Gang in addition to all my series, Amy Mac's huge Geoff Sterling - Expanding the Family series, Neel Down's complete 30 chapters of Nude Like Me, Data001's complete 33 chapters of his Head Teacher story, plus many others.
Unfortunately, I can't promise that any series won't be published in a 'trickle'... anywhere. That's just how it is. You even have to wait for the next episode of a soap opera or your favorite teevee series. Like they say, Time is what keeps everything from happening at once.
Some of Paul's comment: I sympathise with him. If I was a reader of a series I really enjoyed I'd feel the same way... In a sense, the problem is caused by the chapters being free. If the reader had to pay for a chapter then the limit on how much they could read would be determined by how much they wanted to pay, and so the limit would be self-imposed. It would not be our fault that they can't read more, but their choice... This will likely become more of a problem when the Gang develops further. I have had many different readers in the past, with many different tastes. I have always tried to cater to as many readers as possible and the inevitable problem with that is that is there are many scenes which just won't be of any interest to some of the readers. If the narrative is heavy with such scenes for a while a slow production rate will be deeply frustrating to those readers who aren't interested in that particular theme.
Again, thanks for your feedback and thoughts. Any readers want to comment on this?
name: Noe
storyname: Summertime at Grandpa Dicks
email-subject: Rest of the story
comments: Hi just found this hot story and wonder if I can read the last two chapters?
Great story so far by the way
Hi Nada,
I'm pretty sure I've posted here before that my story series are published on our member site, including chapters 8B and 9 of Summertime. You can see all of what's been posted there at the chapter listing and site outline page. We're adding new stories all the time, including two per week of Paul Turner's The Gang, with over 200 chapters posted there and continuing, plus my new Porn Families.series. Over 40 chapters of my Zoo Mom saga have been published there plus Amy Mac's gigantic, raunchy Geoff Sterling quadruple-X rated continuing series.
And much more exclusive to our site..
Both of chapters 8B and 9 of Summertime have been posted there after one of our members helped me finish chapter 9. We often give previews to our members of stories that we've worked on and will publish in the future, to get their comments or ideas... or even help us write some of the scenes.
It looks like Summertime 8B has been on our site for a while, so I'll try to get it posted here in the near future.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story and appreciate your comments.
[Info on Free Trial Membership included here]
name: Martin
storyname: The gang
email-subject: The gang
comments: Bit slow to start, but once it started, it is a rollicking good read!
Kepp up the good work
Hi Mart,
Thanks for your comments. I'll be sure to pass them on to Paul. He really likes knowing that readers enjoy his story and it only gets better and more interesting as it goes along. He not only has much more of The Gang available but he's also sent me several of his other - but shorter - series. As long as readers bang on that Contact button and let me know they want more, I'll continue to post them. That goes for my stories too. It's the only way we know anyone out there is reading them.
name: Adolph
storyname: Previous reply
email-subject: Belly riders
comments: The first hand account about belly riding experience is given by Jillian and Pomponio Magnus. They are now a very old couple, but she belly rode in Carnival in the 1920's. Her story is fasinating. There must be 100's of stories like hers that deserve reprinting. This is for rich girls only. As only they can afford the horses and the time it takes to train at the age of 6.
Hey Dolf
Thanks for more information on the subject. Damn, I'd really like to find out more about the training of the 6 year olds. That's something I could write a story... or a whole series, on.
If you have any links to such materials, I'd love to find out more about it. Everything I've heard is that it is quite an old practice and I'd love to learn more of the history of it. Data and I had planned to write a whole series about the erotic Carnival in Brazil, but we've just not gotten around to it. I would love to have something that would give me a basis to start writing some of that. Some stories have noted that it is all fiction. But of course, some would have to say that to somehow get around proscribed subject matter.
There seems to be a bit of hentai and 3DX graphics and animations on the subject. Not belly ridiing specifically, but horse sex.
Generally, what I write about has a mostly factual basis in real life. If I could find more than just fictional stories and 3DX animations on the subject, I'd be able to include more of it in some of my series. So if you or anyone have factual or RL based information,let me know and I would probably include it in some of my stories. Especially my Zoo Mom one. I suspect that Sissy would love to have bodacious Karen help her get mounted under one of the horses at Uncle Bart's stables.
Thanks again for your comments on this interesting subject. I'll have to ask Goldfish if he has any more information on belly riding other than what he's written in his stories. I have no idea whether he has first hand knowledge of the practice, but he's surprised me before.
name: Adolph
storyname: Al
email-subject:
comments: Enjoy your stories. Female writers are much more varied and creative in sexual matters than us males who tend to be repeative. My intrest of late is true brazilian horse belly riding. How the girl is tied in, hnw the stallions penis is inserted and locks its self in, sometimes for days. And what sports, derbys, races, and parades are associated with this ancient proceeding.
Hail Adolph,
I'm glad you like my stories. I don't know how that works into the female writing thing as I'm a male... uh, last time I looked... Yeah, that's the ticket.. Looked. That's all I did.
My friend, Goldfish, wrote some stories I posted for him that had belly riding in them. Dunno, but you two must have a lot more information on it than I do, as I only know what he's written about it... mostly. I'd sure like to hear from a female who has any experience with it. There have been a bunch of vids with Brazilian ladies taking pleasure with some equine friends, but I've never actually seen anything like belly riding. I sure would like to, tho'.
If I remember right, and I do, I wrote a little in Zoo Mom chapter 11 about Karen riding one of the horses at the stable in an undersling harness. I think that was written after reading some of Goldfish's stories. If you haven't read that chapter, take a look. I may have to have Karen teach Sissy how to do that.
Again, thanks for your comments.
name: Kinco[redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Update
comments: Keep up the great work.
Hi again, Kinky
Looks like if it's Sunday, you send me a nice email to try to get me motivated and motated. Actually, flattery will get you everywhere. I promise to post some more Zoo Mom. Or maybe Summertime 8B? Like they say, keep those [digital] cards and letters comin' in. It's the only payment authors here on asstr get for posting our stories for you.
I hope you're all enjoying the new chapters of The Gang that I'm putting online for Paul. We're working on a website for him and his many series and stories. Stay tuned for info on that as it develops.
name: Kinco[redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Update
comments: Hope you post more chapter's soon great story.
Hey Kinky,
Thanks. I will be adding more soon. Planning on Sept 5th for the next update. Don't know yet for sure what I'll post but will figure out something.
I appreciate the feedback and encouragment.
name: meth
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: Good to see two more chapters available. This is the erotic tale that I would write (with the added bonus that I grew up in the New Forest). It really hits my buttons and is extremely well written. I am a copy editor and know of what I speak.
Somewhere on your site you say that other episodes are already published in the members' area but I have not been able to locate that. In the absence of that I will have to wait with baited breath for more episodes to be published. Thanks for doing so and thanks to Paul for great storytelling.
Regards
meth
Hi methhead,
Hey, happy that you enjoy the story and that Paul has graciously allowed me to post the series for him. I'll send him a copy of your comment. I know he appreciates any feedback, thoughts or comments on it. And yes, it is an extremely well written story. It makes you feel you're right there with them.
In my correspondence with Paul, we're working on possibly putting up a website so more of his writing can be published online. Just in the planning stages right now. It won't be on asstr.org unfortunately as there are no new accounts being created due to lack of owner/admin interest in maintaining it. He has definitely approved of my publishing The Gang here and I will as long as I can get access to my site.
I would have thought that everyone would get tired of seeing the links to our White Productions member site, where we have over 200 chapters of Paul's story posted and adding about 2 each week. He just sent me chapters 300-400 so I'll have enough to keep going for a while.
Thanks again for your great comments. I'll pass this on to Paul and I'm sure he'll be happy to know his work is appreciated for its quality.
name: Jim
storyname: the twisted mind
email-subject: Sex with your student
comments: Wow, that was one "hot" story. I couldn't put it down once I began reading it and I got so excited I had to loosen up my pants. Would love to read chapter 2 and later chapter 3.
Hey J,
Thanks for your comment. I'm very happy you liked the story. Unfortunately, I just have to guess at which one of my many you're referring to. "the twisted mind" is the name of the website, which has many stories on it, as well as some think an apt description of my mental processes. Or lack thereof.
I would guess, using 'sex with student' and wanting to read ch 2, that you mean my story of lovely Ellen. I enjoyed writing that one and actually had help from Ellen herself in starting chapter 2 and her ideas for the series. I've got at least part of the 2nd chapter mostly done but it's a little light - that is, shorter than I usually like my chapters to be.
Since I posted that first chapter here many years ago, I've gotten some very nice feedback on it, similar to yours. I'm very glad you could enjoy it so much it got you "excited". After all, that's what erotic fiction is all about... emphasis on the "erotic". At least, I would hope.
And I'd hope you had to do more than just loosen your pants.
One such comment was from a guy who said that it closely resembled an experience he'd had with a wonderful lady teacher many years ago and it brought back some rather heartfelt pleasant memories for him. I certainly hope that his experience did the same for the lady teacher.
I will look and see if chapter 2 is finished enough that I can get it posted here in the future. Like I said, I enjoyed the story too. Thanks so much for your kind comment. Since you asked so nicely, I'd be happy to let you preview what I've got done on the 2nd chapter if you'd like. You can give me your thoughts on it.
name: Kinco[redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Update
comments: Hope you post again soon.
Hey again King-ky,
Since you're one who's been paying attention, you know that I've been posting new chapters or stories here pretty regularly lately. I'll try to continue to do that as long as I'm lookin' at the green side of the dirt and can do it.
And as I've reiterated many times, the only way we authors know anyone is reading our krapTM is if, like you, readers bang on that Contact button up there and let me know. It's the only payment we get here on asstr.org for publishing out stoires for free for you all to read. Even if it's only just an encouraging comment like yours. Thank you!
name: grandpa66
storyname: summertimes
email-subject: chapter 9
comments: when will you post chapter 9
Hi grand,
Thanks for reminding me. I just looked and realized that I haven't posted Summertime chapter 8B here yet, so I probably should do that soon.
As far as chapter 9, I'd gotten about half of it written and then just it just petered out. One of our White Productions members who helped me with one of my Zoo Mom chapters also worked with me on Summertime chapter 9 and helped me get the torture session with lovely Claire finished. I haven't yet had a chance to post it for our members yet, so it probably will be a while before it's published here.
As you know, you can get all of my latest stories on my Ole Stories page where they're posted first.
Thanks for your comment/question.
name: Daisy Mae
storyname:
email-subject: submission
comments: I would like to submit stories to your site. Is it possible, and if so How do I do it?
Hi Daisy,
Actually, I originally intended my assrt.org pages to just be for sharing my own writing. Like I've said before, I write for my own self and then share online some of it so others might read them. I had not planned on posting other authors' stories. Then a reader sent me a few stories, saying he was cleaning off his hard drive and wanted me to have them and do whatever I wanted with them. After reading, I decided I liked the themes and the writing, so I put them up on my pages. Note that I have nothing to do with the operation of the asstr.org site. I'm merely one of many authors.
Then another online acquaintance who'd been posting his stories on one of the asstr collections contacted me. We corresponded and I ended up putting several of his very well written stories on my "other authors" page because I thought my readers would like some of the themes.
Which brings us to present. We've been posting Paul Turner's series The Gang on our White Productions member site and have over 200 chapters posted there so far. Since our members have really enjoyed reading Paul's series, I asked him if I could start posting them here on my asstr pages. He graciously agreed and we've gotten a lot of great feedback about them.
Over the last decade, I've had numerous readers send me their stories, however I'm a bit particular about the quality of writing. Few have been able to meet my writing standards. Usually, I don't want unsolicited stories as I barely have enough time to read and write my own, plus keep not only this asstr site pages updated and maintained, but also our membership site. I really don't have the time or desire to read, proof and edit other writer's material. In fact, I really haven't even read many stories on asstr.org for several years.
Unfortunately, asstr.org hasn't been and isn't being maintained and no new author accounts are being added/created. That really limits where writers of certain adult fiction themes can get their stuff published. If you had included a valid email, I might have been able to provide a way for you to get your material to me. Because of the lack of access for new authors on asstr.org, I'm more open to looking at some new material, especially from female authors. But as I've said, I'm a bit selective about the quality of writing and themes that I would post here.
I DO appreciate your contacting me with your inquiry. Next time, include a valid email address so you can get a direct response.
name: Just a name
storyname: Lynn
email-subject: It's odd
comments: I don't like much of the subject matter in the Zoomom series but it's weirdly compelling and I always read a new story when it pops up in the new section. The only I really liked was the one where Lynn tries on different outfits at the mall, more of that please. Despite that I keep reading it, it's odd.
Hi Justa,
I don't know what to tell ya, other than according to a LOT of people, I'm a bit odd. Well, they use quite a few other terms, but for this purpose, odd will do, I guess.
As I've noted before, I write stories for myself mainly, and then post them so others might enjoy them... or rant and rail against them, whatever's the case. There are thousands of stories of every possible theme on asstr.org, so everyone should be able to find and enjoy something they like. But as I've said before, I'm an equal opportunity pervert and if you don't like something in my stories, just wait a while and there will be something more or different for you to love or hate. Never can tell what will spew out of the cesspool that is my subconscious mind. What there is of it.
On the one hand, I'm glad that my stories have such a compulsion for you that you continue to read them. But as with all my readers, I fear for your sanity too. I may be more than a bit off, but what about the readers of my filth? Is there a psychiatric code in the DSM for that?
I enjoyed writing that mall excursion too. I got to do the research for all of those hot, sexy outfits. And of course, the models for them are some fine looking ladies. Ya know, it's a dirty job, but someone's gotta do it and to write a decent story, I guess I'm the one.
My condolences for your odd compulsion for reading something you don't really like that well, but also thank you for doing it. And for letting me know. I appreciate the feedback, odd or not.
name:
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: I have been enjoying every chapter I anticipate every new adventure in to the loving depravity of this fantasy fueled and unknown world to me and I find myself enjoying living vicariously through each of the caricatures lives your stories are exciting your carricture vivid sexual beings and create for me an environment that fuels my rather normal and safe sexual adventures to new heights of fantasy sex truly finds it's flame and fire in the mind and you have created a raging forest fire in my mind thank you for the chance to burn in the after glow of that inferno and to rest quiet and spent when the fire in my heart and mind slows to a pilot lite waiting for the next chapter to reignite my burning desires and return me to the front lin
Hi blank,
I'm happy that my stories can let you live a wild fantasy life and let your imagination run wild. Just hope that your inferno doesn't but the garage down.
I appreciate your enthusiastic enjoyment of my krapTM. I'll try to keep posting more here as I get a chance to. You can read all of the stories I've posted on my Ole Stories page on our member site. They are all published there first, including ones that are published there exclusively and nowhere else.
Thanks again. I really appreciate all the feedback I get, I read it all and respond to those who include an email address.
name: Dares
storyname: An idea
email-subject: I have a recurring idea
comments: I cannot write a story as you do. I thought about a plot. A boy and a girl meet at 15 and begin a love story. She is a virgin before this bf and she reluctantly gives in but without enthusiasm. When she is 18yo she leaves her boyfriend. The guy grows and becomes a scientist. He creates a time travel machine in order to get his vengeance. He goes back in time when the girl was 10 and begin to corrupt her into a huge pain slut. So, when they meet at 15, she is a submissive slut and they begin a totally different relationship.
I don't know why but I have this idea and I've never read anything similar.
Have a nice day.
Hi Dare
As I've noted before on my What's New and Story Notes pages and here in the replies to comments, I started writing my stories because I didn't find ones that I liked. Over the years, I've read thousands of stories on asstr and other sites, but just ended up not finding what I wanted. So I started writing my own and then sharing them so others might read them. Some themes I like, others not so much. So I write on the ones I like. For myself.
Believe it or not, I actually try to stay based in RL rather than fantasy... that is, most of what I write is actually happening or is capable of happening in RL. If Lynn puts a snake in her cunt, that's been done and video'd. If she takes huge needles and nails in her tits, that type of action is featured on certain video sites. If Karen takes a horse... well, you know. All of the extreme fetish acts that happen in my stories are based on stuff that actually goes on in the real world. I just wrap them in a bit of fantasy characters and storyline and have them do it.
So even though I have a writers block at times, I do have enough ideas for story lines from just watching a few amateur porn vids, etc. I appreciate your comment and idea, however interesting, but I don't usually write SF/fantasy. Tho' some of my readers may not agree with that.
BTW, I have been reading several series of time travel novels by some great authors, which does make me painfully aware of the time travel paradox. And it makes my brain hurt just thinking about it
Thanks for taking the time and making the effort to send me your thoughts. I appreciate it, even if I wouldn't probably be able to help with that storyline.
name: Bareback Bandit
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject:
comments: I'd love to see the deliberate intent of all the barebacking.
Intentional high risk sex. Even bug chasing/gift giving.
50 guy creampie gangbangs for Kari and Sissy. And Horses and dogs fucking Kari. Something tells me Kari will enjoy the pain. And that Rob and Lynn will enjoy watching it more than they think.
And everyone should ease up on the great hygiene too.
Introduce some STDs and give little Kari what she wants...to have her baby cunt painfully warped by all adult and animal dicks...WHOLE dicks...to the base... forced inside her. And if Kari and Sissy would somehow find crack pipes in their mouths during their skanking... that'd be fucking EPIC
Hi Bare,
Thanks for your comments and ideas. I'm not big on STD's and such. I am working on an old guy gangbang of Kari, something she really enjoys. Haven't got a lot of it done yet, but I'll keep working on it. And yeah, Lynn does watch, help and loves it.
Believe it or not, I try to keep within the realm of RL and what's actually happening. Plus I'm not into N/C and forced pain type of stories. There's probably many of those out there and better written than what I'd do. I read them if I run across them but don't search them out, so can't point you to any of them.
I'm also not big on drug use and such. But again, I appreciate your feedback. Hope you'll continue reading my pervy Zoo Mom series and others.
name: Tucker
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: All
comments: I love all your work. You are fucking disgusting I really don't get into shirt but the water sports and youngsters are great. Even 2, 3 and 4 year olds. It drives me crazy to wait for the next chapters of zoo to get to the piercings and everything else
Hi fucker... oops, Tucker
Glad you like my krap®. And believe me, I've been told I'm disgusting before, but probably not meant quite in the same vein as yours.
You don't get into shirts?? What do you wear? Even a wife beater is a "shirt".
Yeah, I used to love water skiing and boating when I was younger too. Probably not as young as 2, 3 or 4... Oh, wait. < Emily again > "Nevermind!"
From the sounds of it, it would be a pretty short trip for you...
Hey, ya can't blame me when you give me such perfect setups. Maybe we should hit the Catskills circuit. But I appreciate your thoughts and feedback. If you can't wait for more of my perverted Zoo Mom family saga, you can always read more new ones that I've posted on my Ole Stories page along with many others on the site. We've usually been updating/adding something every week.
You don't have to take the drive if you just watch my What's New page here as I try to keep it up to date with anything new I post on these pages. I will try to keep adding more here if readers, like you, bang on that contact button and let me know anyone is out there reading. Otherwise I don't know that anyone cares.
Again, I sincerely appreciate your enthusiastic feedback.
(and for the perfect setups.)
name: kronos
storyname: summertime @ gpa dicks
email-subject: gpa dick
comments: love it, keep it up
Hey chronic,
Glad you enjoy grandpa's dick. He's keeping it up all the time with young Karen around.
name:
storyname: 23C Zoo Mom
email-subject: Thanks
comments:Glad to see you are still washing your hands.
Thanks for 23C Zoo Mom. Submissive Teachers, oh, my.
I'm wishing for a vaccine. But the news tells me of a t-shirt at the Black Hills Sturgis Rally: "Screw COVID," read the design on one T-shirt being sold. "I went to Sturgis."
Hi blank,
I AM still washing my... uh, hands. Yeah, that's the ticket. Sure... Hands.
Glad you're enjoying Zoo Mom chapter 23C. I'll see if I can get chapter 23D formatted and ready for posting in a while. And I think there's another chapter with Adrienne and Bobby having a good ol' time coming up in chapter 24A. I think. I'll have to go back over them and do some re reading to get caught up. Dirty work, but somebody's gotta do it.
Regarding a vaccine: So far there has been no vaccine possible for the common cold or flu that we get every year. Yeah, they claim that the 'flu shots' they give will take care of the flu, but the problem is that it works, sometimes, for last year's flu. Plus it makes a LOT of people sick who might not have been. Like they say, wish in one hand and shit in the other and see which one fills up first.
I agree with the sentiment of the T-shirt. Don't even need the 'I went to Sturgis' part.
name: ste[redacted]
storyname: story
email-subject:
comments: i would love to read about a woman cub scout leader who fucks her boy scouts and also gets into a boys dog fucking her while she sucks the boy off.
Hi stewie,
Hey, I'd like a story like that too. Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to write an outline for me. Make it with some really good, salacious bits in it, describing what you'd like to see/read. That way, it will not only titillate my subconscious to hopefully spew out some delicious scenes that I can write and then share with you and my readers, but give you an idea of what it takes to actually write a story.
You'll find that it's pretty easy to come up with what seems to be a pretty simple, erotic idea. Then you get down to selecting the characters that will fit the scenario, coming up with their backstory or history- what got them to this point. Then you have to work up the actual scenario or storyline, introducing and describing the characters to the reader, leading them into the situation you're creating, developing the narrative and dialog as they go through it. Then comes all the reading, re-reading, editing, fixing, editing, re-reading, more editing, re-reading, on and on and on.
One of the reasons why I like to write series as opposed to stand alone stories is that once it's started, both the basic storyline and the characters are already developed and familiar to readers and I don't have to go through all of that development again. Plus, I really like my characters and what they do, so I don't want to see them 'disappear' by ending a storyline. Hopefully, each story chapter can stand on its own and be enjoyable to read... or get off on.
As you can see, the basic "simple" story idea becomes a long, drawn out process and is a lot more complicated than it looks. It's actually a LOT of work. Some people can bang out 5-10 thousand words in a day. I used to be able to do that, but the damn writers block seems to have really limited what and when I can get anything out. And then, sometimes I go back to something I've written quite a while ago and find things that I can add or change. I call it looking at it with "new eyes".
So you can see that writing a simple story is really quite a long drawn out process and sometimes, anything but simple. Like Nathaniel Hawthorne said, "Easy reading is damn hard writing."
name: Wierdo
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: I love The Gang and can't get enough. I wait eagerly for the next chapters each week and read them several times to ensure that I remember all of the story. I go through in my mind different story lines that might occur in the future including some younger children and even boy and girl dogs. Please please please keep the chapters coming, I think Ben is going to have a lot of fun. Regards and thanks.
Hi Weerd,
I've forwarded your email compliment along to Paul. I know he really appreciates any comments or thoughts about his The Gang series. I'll try to continue posting more of his story when I can get them converted to webpage format. As noted below, he's sent me the first 300 chapters, so we've got a ways to go. I've just got to get the time to do the html conversions.
I don't know how much your fantasy ideas will go in that story. I've only seen the first few hundred, but Paul is actually working on chapter 1263, or thereabouts, as he last updated me. I can't believe he's that prolific. But it's a great story and I'm happy that I can get it online in front of an audience that appreciates it.
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storyname:
email-subject:
comments: muy bueno
Hi anonymoose,
My espanolish is probably 50 years rusty, but I think that means you like my stories.
I appreciate you banging on that contact button and letting me know. It's the only way I can tell if anyone is out there. Thanks!
name: Kinco[redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Update
comments: Keep up the great work hope you will load chapters 25 sometime soon.
Hey King-ky
I've actually got a LOT of backlog material. I've been going through it and looking for what I can post on the White Productions member site. I've got a lot that will only be posted there tho'.
I'll keep posting some of Zoo Mom and some others here on asstr.org. Paul, the UK author, has sent me the first 300 of his The Gang series that he's allowed me to post online for him, so I won't be running out of THAT one any time soon.
Glad you're enjoying the stories. Keep up the readin'!
name: Rude
storyname: Incest
email-subject: Intro comment
comments: Incest into comments were very interesting. I agree with your piece/
What wind shield torch light were you referring to I would like to bee on the lookout for one.
Thank you for your stories.
Hi Rude,
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you're enjoying my stories.
Guess I'll have to go back and re-read some of my stuff as I don't remember where I made those comments. But I do off-the-top-of-my-head krap all the time, so you never can tell what might spew out.
I'm not really sure which 'torch' light you're referring to, but I suspect that it might have been a reference to something many, many ice ages ago. Like I've said before, I'm so old that I remember when dirt was clean. Well, I used to when my memory actually was semi-functional. Now I can't remember what I had for breakfast.
Also, keep in mind that what I write is adult erotic fiction/fantasy and many of the things I write about are either illegal or fattening. So be careful, don't try this at home, perform only by a trained professional on a closed course and if you have an erection lasting longer than 4 hours, contact the Guiness Book Of Records. [<-- legal disclaimers
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name: LoT
storyname: The Gang
email-subject: Looking forward to the rest
comments: I'm really liking the way this story is going - am looking forward to reading the rest
Hi pLoT
I'm really happy that you and others are enjoying Paul's great story The Gang and I'll definitely let him know of your interest.
You and others who enjoy it are in luck, because Paul has sent me the first 300 (!!) chapters of his story, so I probabbly won't run out of them soon. I'm trying to post at least two at a time regularly so you will have some great reading and won't have to wait too long for the next chapter.
Thanks again for letting us know. It's the only way we know if someone is out there in readerland and cares about reading our stories. As long as you all are reading, we'll try to keep writing and posting them for you.