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Comes
the Bride is the third part of Switch: a novel,
the story of Johnnys and Maeves adventures.
Maeve
and Johnny get married, finally. Johnny gets two new girls; Johnny
now has five. Maeve gets headaches. Why do they have to be so beautiful?
The
story, in eight chapters, covers events from Sunday, October 26,
1958 to Sunday, November 2, 1958. The events (directly following
the previous parts The Babysitter) include
prostitution and group sex. Johnny and Maeve marry on November first,
thus the title.
This
is the third part of Switch: a novel. The first part
is Switch,
the second is The
Babysitter. The fourth, and final, part is The
Revolver.
Links
to Chapters
Story Codes and Disclaimer
Research
Writing Process
Links
to Chapters
There are eight chapters, each covers a single days events.
The Schedule at the end of the first chapter is referred to throughout
the Comes the Bride.
| Chapter
Eighteen |
Sunday,
October 26 |
Story
Codes:
More
on these below.
MF,
MFF, M+F, FF, M+F+
BDSM,Prostitution, Exhib, Oral, Anal
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| Chapter
Nineteen |
Monday,
October 27 |
| Chapter
Twenty |
Tuesday,
October 28 |
| Chapter
Twenty-one |
Wednesday,
October 29
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| Chapter
Twenty-two |
Thursday,
October 30 |
| Chapter
Twenty-three |
Friday,
October 31 |
| Chapter
Twenty-four |
Saturday,
November 1 |
| Chapter
Twenty-five |
Sunday,
November 2 |
| The
Schedule |
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Comes
the Bride is about 70,000 words long I hope you enjoy
it. If you do (or do not) let me know. Email
me.
Story
Codes and Disclaimer
This story, like others in the Lair, deserves story codes. Here
they are:
Predominately
heterosexual MF, MFF, FF, M+F, M+F+. There is one instance
of Mf which is referred to only, not described.
Themes:
Prostitution, gangbang, exhibitionism.
Oral, anal, vegetables/objects
BDSM
themes: Bondage, whipping, dominant/submissive.
All
sex is consensual. All sexually active characters are 21 or older.
None
of the sex in Comes the Bride is safe sex, even by
the standards of the time. I wouldnt be surprised if everyone
gets the clap. Oh well. Take it from Bingo, while waiting for ones
results for an HIV test is not the time to begin thinking about
safe sex.
DISCLAIMER:
Some of the things the characters do in this story are seen as offensive
or frightening (even terrifying) by some if not most people. Please
dont surprise anyone. Always ask first. Have an agreed upon
safe word even if you dont do BDSM.
Research
Sources mentioned on Switch
Page and Babysitter
Page are relevant to this story.
Leonard
St. Clair and Alan B. Govenar. Stoney Knows How: Life as a Tattoo
Artist. Lexington, KY: The University Press of Kentucky, 1981.
Stoney Knows How is a great book, collecting Stoneys
reminisces of his life in the carnival and later as a tattoo artist
of the old school. Stoney, although severely disabled, supported
himself from the age of fifteen. This incredible book was important
for Glorias tattoo scene in Chapter Twenty, Tuesday, October
28. Stoneys joke comes from page 104. A later scene
in Chapter Twenty-two, Thursday, October 30, Glorias nautical
adventure mentions the belief that tattoos can help save
one from drowning, which also comes from this book. Stoney actually
was in Tampa, Florida in 1958.
Prostitute
prices mentioned throughout the four parts of Switch are purely
guesswork. A number of sources give an idea of the range of prices
in the period:
Stoney
in Stoney Knows How (above) fondly remembers $1 whores. It
is hard to tell if this was in the 1940s or 1950s.
Women
of Las Vegas (described more fully on Switch
Page) mentions Confortes call girls in California
in the 1950s charging $10 for a basic.
Earl
J. Abbott. Attorney General Bob Kennedys Legal Trap
That Caught the Queen of Call Girls. True Police Cases.
October 1963: vol. 15, no. 155. Pages 32-37, 72-74. This article
in a true crime magazine describes a Chicago call girl operation
in the late 1950s and early 1960s. The rock bottom price
was $20 and went up to $500 or more (p. 36); all night was $150.
The call girls also were used as escorts at $30 an hour. Some of
the prostitutes made more than $25,000 a year, a lot of money at
that time. The girls got 60% of the take. Their hours were Monday
through Friday, 2 p.m. to 2 a.m., never on Saturday or Sunday (p.
72). The organization had a number of apartments scattered throughout
the city for the girls to use and had to make payoffs to organized
crime. Still, it was a million dollar operation.
Sam
Boal. The Pros of Paris: love for sale in the city of light.
Playboy. October 1958: vol. 5, no. 10. Pages 30-34, 38, 40,
58. This illustrated article describes the range of prices in Paris.
My impression is that the article is showing a Paris as a place
with extremely inexpensive prostitutes. The least expensive women
were $5 and under. The next tier was $7-10. The third tier was $15-20
and up. The highest tier was the courtesan who required, besides
dinner and a seat at the theater, $100 for an evening. If I didnt
think there would be copyright problems, Id include some of
the photographs illustrating this article. Some of the women are
beautiful (e.g., Babette, a $7 girl). Here is a short selection
to give an idea of its flavor:
Since the girls
of the Champs-Elysees [$15-20 tier] are the most charmingly conspicuous,
it might be interesting to examine a few of them. There is, for
instance, Janine, an extremely mobile girl who bears the nickname
La Croix Rouge The Red Cross. The nickname is inevitable,
one supposes, since she plies her trade, in and around the Champs-Elysees,
in an ambulance. She declines to use the hotel rooms the other girls
use; she drives her own hotel. She finds her man, drives him to
a side street, tumbles into the back with him and thats that.
The Red Cross is extremely popular; she is pretty and moreover with
her the man can save the cost of the hotel room. Furthermore, she
is immune from police action. There is a Paris law which makes it
illegal to use a residence for immoral purposes; but
the city fathers did not anticipate Janine, and thus it is not illegal
to use a vehicle for similar high jinks. [page 34]
Glorias
$70 charge is high. It must be remembered that her clientele were
drawn from the economic elite in the city and that she is exceptionally
good looking and skilled. Such a rate doesnt seem unimaginable.
Gladys
story of her past in Chapter Twenty-four, October 31, 1958, is based
very loosely on an account of a young prostitute I read a couple
of years ago. The woman had finally managed to leave home (and her
grandfathers abuse) at the age of eleven. She lived in the
woods, surviving by becoming a prostitute. At twenty-eight she was
attempting to deal with her addiction, HIV and lack of education.
She witnessed acts of brutality by a pimp against one of his women
in Philadelphia which shades the fourth part of Switch: a
novel. It was that act of brutality that helped her decide
to attempt to leave her profession.
Writing
Process
The rough draft of Comes the Bride was written in
a two week period in June 2004. The story was written straight through.
I used a binder, filled with special forms on characters and locations
to help keep continuity. A character sheet included physical description,
sexual description (behaviors, appearance when naked, etc.), car(s)
owned and the characters personal history. These sheets were
extremely helpful when describing a characters eye color,
for instance, or the car they were currently driving.
Revision
was relatively straight forward correcting, rewriting, and
polishing.
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