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The
Revolver is the fourth part of Switch: a novel,
the story of Johnnys and Maeves adventures.
Weeks
later, Johnny has even more girls (Maeve has lost count). Johnny
gets another, the wife of one of his best friends. Maeve discovers
shes never lonely. She also discovers that she usually is
not with Johnny.
The
story, in eight chapters, covers events from Saturday, December
6, 1958 to Sunday, December 21, 1958. The events (about a month
after the previous partsComes the Bride)
include prostitution and group sex.
This
is the fourth, and final, part of Switch: a novel.
The first part is Switch,
the second is The
Babysitter, and the third is Comes
the Bride.
Links
to Chapters
Story Codes and Disclaimer
Research
Writing Process
Links
to Chapters
There are eight chapters, each covers a single days events.
The Schedule
at the end of the twenty-seventh chapter is referred to throughout
The Revolver.
| Chapter
Twenty-six |
Saturday,
December 6 |
Story
Codes:
More
on these below.
MF,
MF+, M+F, FF, M+F+
BDSM, Prostitution, Exhib, Oral, Anal
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| Chapter
Twenty-seven |
Sunday,
December 7 |
| Chapter
Twenty-eight |
Monday,
December 8 |
| Chapter
Twenty-nine |
Tuesday,
December 9
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| Chapter
Thirty |
Wednesday,
December 10 |
| Chapter
Thirty-one |
Thursday,
December 11 |
| Chapter
Thirty-two |
Friday,
December 12 |
| Chapter
Thirty-three |
Sunday,
December 21 |
| The
Schedule |
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The
Revolver is about 70,000 words long I hope you enjoy
it. If you do (or do not) let me know. Email
me.
Story
Codes and Disclaimer
This story, like others in the Lair, deserves story codes. Here
they are:
Predominately
heterosexual MF, MF+, FF, M+F, M+F+. There is one instance
of Mf which is referred to only, not described.
Themes:
Prostitution, gangbang, exhibitionism.
Oral, anal, vegetables/objects
BDSM
themes: Bondage, whipping, dominant/submissive.
All
sex is consensual. All sexually active characters are 21 or older.
None
of the sex in The Revolver is safe sex, even by the
standards of the time. I wouldnt be surprised if everyone
gets the clap. Oh well. Take it from Bingo, while waiting for ones
results for an HIV test is not the time to begin thinking about
safe sex.
DISCLAIMER:
Some of the things the characters do in this story are seen as offensive
or frightening (even terrifying) by some if not most people. Please
dont surprise anyone. Always ask first. Have an agreed upon
safe word even if you dont do BDSM.
Research
Sources mentioned on Switch
Page, Babysitter
Page and Bride Page
are relevant to this story.
In
the weeks after writing The Revolver I read three
books which provide additional information about prostitution. I
wish I had known of them earlier.
Judge
John M. Murtagh and Sara Harris, Cast the First Stone (New
York: Pocket Books, Inc., 1957). Cast the First Stone deals
exclusively with prostitution in New York City in the 1950s. Hundreds
of prostitutes, pimps and johns were interviewed. The book begins
with an overview of the prostitutes working in New York, from the
high-class call girls to the lowest streetwalkers, and the distinct
areas they worked in the city.
The
book then provides in-depth stories of six prostitutes followed
by more stories of prostitutes, pimps and johns. A history of prostitution
in New York precedes a lengthy description of the process of arrest,
prosecution, sentencing and prison for prostitutes.
The
book as a whole, but especially the firsthand material gleaned from
interviews, is an important resource. Most of Johnnys girls
are like Jean Lee Simmons, the twenty-four-year-old college educated
prostitute in chapter seven, who turned to prostitution to help
satisfy her sexual appetite. In this passage from pages 98-99 shes
married, a housewife, and, while she loves her husband, goes to
bars during the day for sex:
She began to
clean the house, scrubbing floors that had been scrubbed by her
cleaning woman, making dirty work for herself. Nothing helped. She
gave up and went out to get some men. She took one to a fleabag
hotel on 46th Street and the other to one on 48th Street. Then she
called Barney and asked whether he couldnt please come home
to lunch. She said she knew he was busy but she had to see him.
"I guess Im shameless," she said. And he said, "Ill
sock you one if I ever hear you talk that way about yourself again.
Remember, youre talking about the woman I love." She
said, "Yes, I remember. Oh, darling, I remember."
She practically
dragged him into the bedroom when he came home and he left without
eating any lunch. That was when she vowed shed save him from
herself, no matter what, and went to Eddie Pastors again and
picked up three men in quick succession. Then she went home and
tried to read. But it wasnt any good so she went back to Eddie
Pastors. A young man in a lumberjacket and tight-fitting pants
was drinking Scotch at the bar. He was clean-cut and she liked the
looks of him. She sat down beside him and ordered a Scotch for herself.
Sara
Harris, Nobody Cries for Me: The Story of a Prostitute (New
York: The New American Library, 1958). The story of Joan, one of
the prostitutes interviewed by Sara Harris for Cast the First
Stone is present in this book. Joan was thirty-seven; she had
been a prostitute since she was seventeen. Joan, like many of the
women in Cast the First Stone, was a heroin addict.
Joans
story in many ways is similar to Gladys in Switch: a
novelraped at fifteen, prostitute at seventeen, plagued
by abusive pimps. Joan had her first orgasm when she was twenty-seven.
Shes very hard-boiled in the way she tells her story. Heres
an excerpt from page 42:
I never felt
anything for the men I went with. No doubt I was afraid and I pushed
my feelings down. But I didnt know what I was doing when I
first started in the business. I thought I really was casual. Id
tell myself I was in a business just like any other business. Supposing
I was waiting on table for a living. What would I feel about that?
I had to feel the same about my whoring. It was a living and thats
all it was.
Car dates are
the quickest kinds of dates. Usually, the car trick is nervous and
as anxious to get the thing over with as you are. He doesnt
care about preliminaries the way house and call tricks do. I hardly
ever stayed in cars more than five minutes and Id usually
get three to five dollars a time. Once in a great while Id
find a trick whos pay ten and want to keep me longer.
Alexa
Albert, Brothel: Mustang Ranch and Its Women (New York: Random
House, 2001). Alexa Alberts is a Harvard Medical School graduate
who did a condom public health study at the Ranch for several years.
Brothel tells about the women she met who worked there, the
support staff and the customers. Since Albert lived at the Ranch
with the women she is able to provide an intimate portrait of them,
their community and the communities that interacted with them.
Women
in the brothel knitted and crocheted, like Neva in The Revolver,
or found other occupations like reading to help them during their
slack moments. This excerpt from pages 129-130 gives an idea of
the book:
Sometimes,
though, it was the prostitute who complicated the professional relationship.
Like a prostitute named Mercedes had done with a customer named
Gary. Gary had been Mercedess regular for over two years.
In his early thirties, with curly brown shoulder-length hair, a
soft gentle voice, and acne scars across his face, Gary was a self-professed
late bloomer who was very shy with girls.
He first visited
Mustang, in his words, out of desperation." Although
he wasnt a virgin, he had limited sexual experience. Gary
picked Mercedes, a tall, slender African-American woman in her mid-thirties,
out of a lineup because of his attraction to black women. When she
provided his most exciting and confidence-building sexual encounter
yet, he got hooked. To her surprise, so did she.
Whenever Mercedes
flew back to Reno from her home out of state, she called up Gary
and begged him to come out to Mustang to keep her company. For reasons
I didnt entirely understand, at one point she began giving
Gary a portion of her earnings. Gary once explained to me: "One
night she said, Theres nothing like giving the money
you make to a man. When I told her I didnt want her
money, she started to cry. When I finally agreed, she asked me what
my quota was. I didnt know what to say except that she should
figure it out. The next day, a cab-driver came to my place and handed
me a manila envelope from Mercedes with nine hundred dollars in
it."
Writing
Process
The rough draft of The Revolver was written in a two
week period in August 2004. The story was written straight through.
I used a binder, filled with special forms with information about
characters and locations to help keep continuity.
Revision
was relatively straight forward correcting, rewriting, and
polishing.
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