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Smells Like Time Spirits

By Mr. X


"That's the 4th swim meet we've lost this year!" Karen said tossing her towel into the hamper angrily. The girl's of M.U. were not happy. The lack of wins was attributed not so much to the majority of them, though.

"Yeah, well you know who we have to thank...again!" Meghan retorted looking through the cracked open locker door, "And she's at it again."

Out near the pool stood Dawn Owenton-M.U.'s one woman losing streak and resident hot body. Dawn didn't seem the least bit concerned about the loss as she posed for pictures in her red and gold team bikini. Dawn wasn't exactly the athletic picture of perfection. Her big boobs and long hair contributed much to her lack of speed in the water. Never showing up for practice didn't help much either. But Dawn was Dawn and she had ways of getting around all that and staying on the team.

"Wonder who she's blowing this week?" Jill said cattily.

"Wonder who she's not." Amber shot back.

They'd discussed ways of getting her kicked off the team and even went as far as to follow through with a few ideas. Nothing worked. There was always someone pulling for her. Always some 'favor' she called in. It was clear she was only there as a decoration. Dawn couldn't care less if they won or lost. One thing she did know was she was not that popular with her team mates. She always waited til long after they were gone before she showered up and changed. That was just fine with them.

"Fuck her. Let's get out of here so Miss Priss can use her dressing room."

Later that night, Meghan and Jill went off campus to their friend Shelly's place. Shelly had been involved in stealth research for the government but had quit and took up work as a photographer. No one questioned the sudden change of career paths and it was all water under the bridge by now. All Meghan and Jill wanted was to get the days events off their minds and kick back and relax.

A few beers and a couple hours later and everything seemed far away.

"So you like working as a photographer?" asked Meghan, "You like working with all those models and shit?"

"It's ok." Shelly said "Some of them can be real bitches...but I can deal with them."

"Speaking of.."

"Don't say it, Meg! I don't want to hear that bimbo's name!" said Jill.

"Bimbo? You two having trouble with someone?" inquired Shelly.

"Yeah..you might say that."

"You know...you might feel better if you talked about it. C'mon. I'll get us another cold one and we can clear the air. I could feel the tension as soon as you guys walked in." Shelly said sympatheticly as she got up and went to the kitchen.

Retuning with three long necks, she sat down on the couch. "OK, let's have it. What's bothering you?"

Meghan proceeded to lay it all out. The whole story of how Dawn was dragging them into what was becoming the most losing year of all time. How she was only there to promote her own image and the hell with everyone else. Short of full blown screaming, they explained in detail how they had tried getting her removed from the team, but that all attempts failed. Shelly listened intently. She knew the type well.

"You know? But what the fuck. We've done all we can do. I might just quit the team." said Meghan listfully. Jill echoed the sentiment.

"Now ladies, I don't think it should come to that." Shelly said setting her drink aside, "Oh man ... how are you two at keeping secrets?"

Jill and Meghan shrugged. "We're cool. Why?"

Shelly got up and retrieved a set of keys from her bedroom.

"C'mon. I wanna show you something." she said motioning them to follow her. Unlocking the basement door and flipping on the light they went down stairs. The usual clutter found in basements everywhere was all around. Shelly slid away two big boxes of clothes from the wall to reveal a large metal door. Meghan and Jill looked at each other puzzled.

"Whatcha got, Shell? A dead alien?" Meghan chuckled.

"Nope. Better." she replied as she punched a code into the electronic keypad. The locks opened to a highly technical looking office and work area.

"This your dark room?" Jill asked.

"Something like that. I been doing some developing in here...but not the kind you could ever imagine. Have a seat." she said coolly as she opened up a locked box.

"Either of you girls remember when I was doing that work for the government? Well this was something I was working on...and have since made a few improvements. Now you can't tell anybody about what I'm going to show you. Agreed?"

Sensing the seriousness, they agreed.

Shelly handed them each what appeared to be wrist watches. "Put those on and we'll begin the demonstration. Cautiously, they did as she said.

"What are these, Shelly?" Meghan asked.

"You'll see. Come on. Let's go outside for a while." Shelly said as she pocketed what looked like a tv remote and motioned them back out.

It was warm out that night. Traffic on the nearby freeway whizzed by all the sounds and activaties for the usual Friday night were there.

"Ready? Now this might take a second to adjust to..."

"It's not gonna hurt is it?" Jill asked nervously.

"Not at all. 3, 2, 1...action." Shelly said as she pressed a button.

Everything went silent. No cars, no talking, no sound and no movement...anywhere!

"Whoa...what the hell?" Meghan said with a start. She and Jill looked around curiously in total disbelief.

 

"Either we're drunk or...fuck...I don't know...uhhhhh, Shelly? What'd you just do?" said Jill with a slight tremble in her voice.

Satisfied that her new attachments were working, Shelly smiled. "Let's go for a walk. I'll explain it all."

The three women walked out into the night. Past one frozen scene after another. Across a busy freeway. Through peoples homes. It was alot for the two girls to take in as they felt like they stepped into a different world. After marvelling at the campus and town stood still for an hour and a half, they went back to Shelly's house. Sitting down on the porch, Shelly got out the remote again. Pressing a different button, all the sounds and movement returned.

Meghan jumped at the suddenness of it.

"Relax. They don't have a clue anything just happened." Shelly laughed as she took the 'watches' back from her friends.

"What do you think?" Shelly asked.

"Total fucking Roswell..Shelly..this is just.."

"Unbelievable." Jill finished. "What are you going to do with that thing? The possibilities are endless."

"Remember what we were talking about earlier? How some of the models can be bitchy and I had ways of dealing with them? Then you said you were having trouble with a certain someone?" said Shelly. Meghan and Jill's eyes lit up.

"You said she didn't like showering with the other girls yet she seemed to enjoy getting exposure. You'd be amazed at what a little dose of humility can do for someone like that."

"Oh but we couldn't...could we?" Meghan wondered out loud.

"It'd have to be just us." Shelly said, "This HAS to be our secret. I am willing to assist if you're up for it."

It didn't take any coaxing to get Jill and Meghan to agree. They wanted Dawn. They wanted her bad. They were in, alright. And the next swim meat on Tuesday was when they would strike! They had three days to come up with a plan. After reviewing so of Shelly's earlier works, they had the perfect one! Dawn would never want to show her face on campus again!

The next Tuesday, the stands were packed around the pool. Meghan and Jill were ready. Shelly had called in a few favors and was scheduled as the event photographer. Everything was in place and no one even noticed Meg and Jill's matching watches. Routinely, they went through their warm up activaties, chatted with their team mates, and went about business as usual.

About 15 minutes before start time, Dawn made her entrance. All eyes were on her as usual as she let her terry cloth robe fall revealing her voluptuous bikini clad form. Her perfect brown hair tied up in a bun. Dawn glanced around to find the photographer(s) and executed her sexiest 'Look at me' walk over to the edge of the pool. A few cameras flashed from the bleachers.

"Looks like someone wants a photo op." Meghan smirked as Dawn sat down on the edge of the pool and arched her back. Her breasts thrust forward, her hard nipples poking at the fabric. She'd look over at the camera seductively from time to time. As long as they were on her, she was all smiles.

"She think this is a fashion shoot or what?" one of her team mates said watching the display. It was time. Jill and Meghan gave the signal by taking their seats by the door. That would make it easier for them not to appear to 'jump' when time restarted. As soon as Shelly saw they were in place, she reached in her camera bag to retrieve some thing. Then-click. Everything stopped.

Excitedly, Meghan and Jill sprang from their seats and rushed over to where Dawn was 'posing' and Shelly was getting things ready.

"Silly bitch...if you only knew!" said Meghan as she poked at the motionless beauty. Still somewhat in awe, they looked around at the frozen crowd. Shelly had pulled out what they'd been needing and carefully laid it out around their victim.

"Ready?" she said to her two accomplices.

"Oh yeah...we're ready! How about you, Dawn? Are you ready for your big debut?" said Meghan getting right in Dawn's smiling face.

"Good. Let's do this." Shelly said producing an X-acto knife. Jill carefully pulled the fabric of Dawn's bikini at the seams and held it as Shelly carefully sliced it apart.

"She is gonna SHIT!" Jill laughed. Working her way from bottom to top, she completely split one side apart. Then the other. The bikini was then pulled away, leaving Dawn stark naked!

"Hope you don't mind, but I wanna get a few 'stills' for my scrap book!" Shelly said as she moved around taking pictures of the unwitting nudie. After a dozen or so, it was time for phase 2.

"Well, Dawn...you had your chance..tsk..too bad. Shelly? May I do the honors?" Jill said as she eyed Dawn's hair.

"By all means." Shelly replied handing over the battery powered shaver, "Have at her. I had another idea on the way over, so...you know..keep it neat."

With shaver in hand and smiling rival in front of her, Jill began giving Dawn her hair-cut. The buzzing device was planted at her forehead and mowed back over the top. Meghan laughed and clapped her hands in delight as she lifted off a huge clump of lucious locks. Shelly took them and set them aside. Jill repeated the process over and over. A thin coating of stubble was all that was left behind. The shaver was taking it off really close! Jill finished up behind Dawn's left ear.

"Hahahhahahaa! She looks like Sinead O' Connor!" Jill said as she rubbed the well rounded and barren scalp in front of her. Shelly took a few more pictures.

"OK. My turn!" Meg said eagerly as she shook up a can of shaving cream. Lathering up thier team mates head, she then produced a Lady Gillette and carefully began scraping away the last vestiges of Dawn's hair! "This is kind of fun! I may need to use your device again sometime!" she said as she carefully removed the white foam. "Just a little off the top!" Jilled said with a laugh. The most amusing thing to them was that she sat there smiling as they shaved her head. Dawn was very particular about who touched her hair!

"A little here...a little...there..and...oh, Dawn-that look is SO you! Whatta ya think, guys?" said Meg as she wiped off what little bits of foam remained. Dawn Owenton was now completely and utterly BALD!

"Beautiful! Take THAT, Miss Perfect!" Jill shouted, "Bet you get a lot of attention NOW, Baldy!"

"Oh..she will. Let me get a few more pictures!" chuckled Shelly as she trained her camera on the unsuspecting bald beauty. Dawn smiled like she liked it. Shelly got her from every angle.

"Alright. I'll get more in a few minutes. Put her bikini back in place. Then we'll finish up and get ready for the show." she said as she put her camera down. Replacing the butchered bikini was easier than Meg or Jill thought. "It won't be there long." Shelly assured them.

"Now...for her precious hair. Lets put it back on. Here. Spray this on her scalp." Shelly said handing Meg a can.

"Glue? I don't get it. We're gluing her hair back on?"

"Yeah...it's ok. It's water soluable. Water." smiled Shelly.

Now getting the plan, the three of them carefully replaced Dawn's hair so it looked flawless from it's former position. No one would be able to tell the difference unless they examined it really close! They cleaned up the area and restored it to 'normal', then returned to their seats.

The same giddy smiles on their faces as when time was stopped, Shelly looked over and resumed her stance with her hand in the bag. "Ready?" she yelled. "DO IT!" they responded.

Click.

The sounds resumed and instantly Dawn's bikini flew off like a rubber band! Shelly continued to take pictures, as did everyone else who witnessed the bizarre specticle! It took Dawn a few seconds to realize what just happened but when she did...

"aaaiiEEEEEKKKKKKkkkk!! What the..wha..OH NO!!" she screamed as she desperately threw her arms over her exposed tits! An eruption of laughter filled the air!

"Hey nice ass, Dawn! Why would you want to hide that from us?!" Jill yelled as she and Meg ran over to the scene that was quickly unfolding before them (again). Dawn was frantic!

In desperation and hoping to hide from the dozens of cameras that were now all around her, she dove into the pool with a scream. Exactly what Shelly was hoping she'd do! When she surfaced, the laughter was getting louder! People were making their way from the stands. Dawn didn't understand. Not until she went to run her hand over her wet...hair? Something was terribly wrong! Her hair line now seemed to extend back a little further than before! With both hands, she began searching her scalp. There was nothing there!

"I..I'm bald? I'm BALD!!!! Ohhhhh...WHAT'S HAPPENING TO ME?!" Dawn screeched as she tried to hide her now glistening hairless scalp AND her nudity from the amused crowd! Something was constantly left exposed!

"Look!" someone shouted, "Her hair! It all came off in the water!"

"Serves you right, you Bimbo!" one of her team mates yelled.

"Smile, Chrome Dome!" yelled one of the year book staff as Dawn was hiding her boobs!

Finally in desperation, Dawn scurried out of the pool and slipped and slided her way to the locker room bare assed naked and totally bald! Shelly winked at her friends and gave them a thumbs up. Dawn's need for exposure had been filled and then some! Totally humiliated, she quit the team and transferred to another university the next day!

M.U.'s losing streak ended the next night! It would have ended that night, but the pool was closed to see what caused the young lady to go completely bald seconds after jumping in. When nothing out of the ordinary was found, her hairloss was blamed on the stress caused by her shoddy bikini falling off! Meghan and Jill delightfully showed the pictures of Dawn's debut all over the internet!

The End

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